Friday, January 29, 2016

butiwillbe



My elementary school teacher told me to never start a sentence with but
                                     but
I love starting sentences with but
but i will be
I know everything I want to be, I am trying everyday

 but i will be a great mother 
but i will be the most loving wife
but i will be a creative writer with good grammar 
               maybe one day
and yes I know those i's should be capitalized
  but i'm just not there yet
but i will be
but i will be the person you want to come home to
but i will be able to worry about myself and not focus so much on others


but i will be better at not letting the past define me
but i will be someone you look up to
but i will be able to forget you 
but i will be an open book to anyone who reads 
but i will be
but I will be better at not eating 13 cookies and feeling like death is upon me
but i will be better at the words i love you

maybe not as co dependent
maybe not as depressed
maybe not as anxious
maybe one day i won't start a sentence with but
                     
 but as for me

i'm just not there yet 




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13 comments:

  1. Savannah FluhmanJanuary 30, 2016 at 9:20 AM

    i too start sentences with but. which i know is incorrect. but i like it that way.

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  2. KetchikanJanuary 30, 2016 at 10:22 AM

    but i will be a creative writer with good grammar "

    I wish had I good Grammar.

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  3. Jayne SoleilJanuary 30, 2016 at 11:01 AM

    but really

    I like this

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2016 at 4:59 PM

    "but I will be better at not eating 13 cookies and feeling like death is upon me"

    I relate to this so much

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  5. PaP Audie January 30, 2016 at 5:00 PM

    but i'm just not there yet

    but you will be darling, you will be

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  6. GajdosJanuary 31, 2016 at 11:07 PM

    Okay, I think I fell in love with you.
    But I am not sure yet.
    Great blog & can't wait to see more.
    #Quality

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  7. Dear DelilahFebruary 1, 2016 at 1:29 PM

    But I really did just eat 13 cookies while I was reading this.. SO good, love the way you write, very creative :)

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  8. Charlotte RoseFebruary 1, 2016 at 2:16 PM

    This. Absolutely loved it. Everybody is trying to better themselves, and they may not be happy yet, /but we all will be/. Hats off to you. :)

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  9. NelsonFebruary 4, 2016 at 7:09 PM

    you're good at this

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  10. Dear DelilahFebruary 7, 2016 at 7:21 PM

    I love the way you write :) super cute

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  11. NelsonFebruary 8, 2016 at 5:47 PM

    also

    chali 2na is one of my favorite emcees of all time and nobody here has heard of him

    #respect

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